How Do I Write Email Copy That Sells Without Being Pushy?
Do you want to make more sales with your emails without coming across as pushy or salesy?
It’s a big challenge most email marketers face so in this episode, we’re diving into how to strike the perfect balance of enthusiasm, authenticity, and simplicity so that you can send more emails and make more sales.
Let’s do this!
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It's really cool and it's FREE (yes, it's cool and free – we're nice like that). We all know that subject lines are important to get right and are a leading measure of your open and click rates – but writing them can be a challenge.
That's why Kennedy has spent months training an AI to write powerful subject lines that is beating top copywriters' subject lines 80% of the time in A/B tests – and you can get access to it here.
Why “Pushy” Isn’t the Problem
Pushiness is a perception issue.
What feels pushy to some might just be enthusiastic and genuine to others. The most important thing is that you truly believe in the value of what you’re offering and let that excitement be read by your subscribers. If your product or service genuinely solves a problem for your subscribers, your job is to share that message with conviction.
But here’s the catch: the way you communicate must feel authentic to you.
Using phrases you dislike or writing with a tone that doesn’t resonate with you can backfire, making you feel inauthentic and uncomfortable – and your subscribers will see right through it too.
The Problem with Over-Promising
One of the biggest ways to make your emails feel pushy and forceful is by overpromising.
Instead of making massive claims, focus on:
- The pain points your audience is experiencing.
- Why solving these problems is urgent.
- How your solution is the answer.
When you focus on emphasising the urgency and relevance of your solution, you shift the focus from pushing a product to addressing their needs and offering a clear next step.
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The Magic of Small Steps
Here’s the secret sauce: your email doesn’t have to do all the selling.
In fact, it shouldn’t. Instead, break the sales journey into smaller steps, leaving each piece to do its best at ONE job.
For example:
- The subject line should intrigue readers enough to open the email.
- The first line should make them read the second line.
- The email’s primary goal? Lead them to click a link, watch a video, or book a call.
When every part of your funnel has just one job, there’s no need for aggressive selling.
Simplicity is Key
Complexity creates resistance.
If you present your audience with an overwhelming process, they’re more likely to tune out. Which means that you’re actively preventing sales. Instead, show how simple it is to take the next step with your solution.
When people feel like the solution is easy and achievable, they’re naturally more inclined to act (and buy!).
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Subject line of the week
This week’s subject line: “39% Open Rate”
What makes it work? It’s ambiguous.
It doesn’t tell you if 39% is good or bad, sparking curiosity. For example, if you’re in the weight loss niche, you could try something like “5 Kilos Lost.”
Without framing it as positive or negative, the reader applies their interpretation – and that’s the hook!
Play with curiosity-driven subject lines and see how they impact your open rates.
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